
All things that begin
must come
to an inevitable end.
A cry of distress,
in an unfamiliar world
and hence begins life.
Some live for a 100 years
without being alive
for even
a second of it.
We are our own undoing.
Blessing or tragedy?
Stop and smell the roses,
they say.
Maybe I should
become that rose
and carry that beauty
within me.
I wish to forge
my own path.
Untethered, free and wild.
Liberated from this worldly cage,
and when Death finally finds me
may it find me alive.
The other day, I came across an African proverb : “When death comes to find you, may it find you alive.”
We spend a lot of our lives being held back by trying to become what we think others expect us to be. We let ourselves be trapped in a cage.
Our soul knows what it wants. At this very moment, it’s speaking to you. Listen. Then go do it, grab it, live it.
Something went wrong with my WP a few days ago, and this got posted before I was done editing it. I removed it as soon as it happened, but a few of you had already read it and left comments. I’m sorry I had to delete that post because it just wasn’t ready. This is the final and improved version!

92 replies on “Worldly Cage”
Gorgeous poem. 🥰🥰
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Hey, I am so glad you thought so and had a good read! Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Hope you have a wonderful day. 🌼
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Loved the poem !
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Hi, I am so happy that you enjoyed reading the poem! Thank you for taking the time to read and for your kind words. Have a happy day. 🌺
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Always my pleasure ❤️❤️.Have a great day.
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Amazing inspiring read. Thankyou so much for sharing. I really enjoyed reading. Keep up the amazing work
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Hey, oh that is so nice of you to say! I hope we find the courage to break free soon. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Hope you have a beautiful day. 🌹
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Wow, love the message! Beautifully put!
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Hello, I am so pleased that you thought so! I am happy that it resonated with you. Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a brilliant day. 🌼
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Wow! The message is so beautiful!❤
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Hey Nawazish, I loved that proverb when I came across it and it made for a good poem, I think! Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a lovely day. 🌹
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My pleasure! Have a great day!❤
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So true Rishika. ♥️ To be alive and celebrate life is what very few people do. Have posted a similar one today.
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Hi Radhika ma’am, I completely agree. Sometimes, we lose ourselves to pessimism and forget to rejoice in the good. I’ll be heading over to yours right away! Thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words. Have a happy day. 🌼
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Beautiful Rishika💖🤗
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Hi Ashok Uncle, oh thank you so much! I really appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you for taking the time to read. Hope you are doing well. Have a blessed day.🌺
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My pleasure entirely Rishika. Hope you are progressing well with your admission process. I would have been so happy if you had got admission in Pune 😊🤗
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It hasn’t begun yet. The NTA will be beginning it on the nationwide level in a week or so! Haha, there is always hope!
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Blessing or tragedy!!! Hmm thoughtful
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Hey Smitha, it’s a question I’ve been pondering on for a while now! Thank you for taking the time to read. Hope you enjoyed reading and that you have a fabulous day! 🌼
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Nicely written 🙂👍
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Hello, I’m so pleased to hear that. Thank you for taking the time to read and for your encouraging words. It is really appreciated! Hope you have a great day. 🌹
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A pleasure 🙂
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“We are our own undoing.”
Love this post so much. May death find us alive. ❤
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Hi Wardah, oh I’m so happy to hear that. So kind of you. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I hope we manage to break free of our cages! Have a lovely day. 🌺
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I hope so too! You’re welcome, and you too! ❤
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Great message, so true
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Hello Jay, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I’m so happy that the concept resonated with you and you had a good read. I really appreciate your encouraging words. Have a lovely day. 🌼
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Ok, this whole poem is simply fantastic, but ESPECIALLY the end:
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Hi Ben, that is so kind of you! I do love that African proverb, I think it made for a beautiful poetic theme. Let’s hope we find the courage to break free of our worldly cages today! Have a beautiful day. 🌹
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Fabulous one written so nicely 👌 with a wonderful messages 👍🏻👍🏻😃💕
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Hi Dulcy, thank you for taking the time to read and for the lovely words of appreciation. I am glad that you thought so! Hope you have a wonderful day. 🌺
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Welcome always 😃❤
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What a beautiful poem! Both the words and the message behind them.
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Hi Ann, that’s music to my ears! Thank you for taking the time to read and for your lovely words. Your support and encouragement is really appreciated! I do honestly believe that it’s time to break free. Hope you have a fantastic day. 🌺
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Beautiful poem Rishika, having this perspective on life is really important. Also, loved the quote, it fit well in the poem. Nice work! 🙌
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Hi Ujjawal, I am so delighted to hear that! When I read the saying for the first time, I instantly thought of it as a mantra of life. Thank you for taking the time to read and your lovely and thoughtful comment. I really appreciate your support, friend. Have a brilliant day. 🌼
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Beautifully written! I feel like it’s a real art to stay ‘alive’ – requires keeping an open mind, adapting and changing up routines. But it can be done and your poem encourages us to do so 🌸😊
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Hey EF, yes it is! It takes courage to be truly alive in a world like ours. It is never ever easy. But then, if it was, it’d probably not be as liberating or freeing. I hope you and I find ways to be ‘alive’. Have a happy day. 🌹
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🌹🌸🦋🌼
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You are indeed a whimsical wordsmith ❣️this is a beautiful poem Rishika. I so agree with that line of living 100 years and the last line too is just awesome!
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Hi HS, you are so kind! I am so delighted that you thought so and had a good read. Surviving is what we do on a daily basis, living is what we should be seeking, or so I think. Thank you for taking the time to read and for the kind words. Have a great day. 🌺
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Definitely! We should live, than survive. Well said.
You too have a great day, Rishika! ❤️
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Wonderful poem. The message is one to ponder and return to. I especially like this part,
Maybe I should
become that rose
and carry that beauty
within me.
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Hi Ali, yes, I think so too. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave your thoughts here. That is so kind of you. I hope we find the courage to break free of our worldly cages soon. Have a happy day. 🌼
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This is so great Rishika!~. I love that line and your poetry that supported it so well!
I too want to live my life with meaning and what matters most. great reminders. I’m sorry about your W.P. There’s always something I’m finding as well! ❤️ Cindy
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Hey Cindy, it’s always a pleasure to hear from you. I think you already are living your life with meaning and the way you spread positivity with your posts is truly inspiring! I think that African proverb has become a life mantra for me now. Thank you for taking the time to read and for this lovely comment. Thankfully, my WP is working alright now. Have a wonderful day. 🌹
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Rishika, I love your poetic voice – your poems always surprise with an unexpected twist.💖
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Hi Michele, that is so very kind of you. Thank you for taking the time to read and for your words. I hope to see more of your art, soon! Have a beautiful day. 🌺
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My pleasure, Rishika. Thanks! You have a beautiful day too. 💐
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Beautiful ❤️
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Hey Gaura, thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and for your kind words. Have a great day. 🌼
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You too have a great day dear 🌼
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Absolutely wonderful Rishika 💜 The call for deep of reflection you have given the reader is fantastic. Quality writing as always.
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Hello, I am so delighted to hear that you think so! Reflection always helps, I think. Thank you for taking the time to read and for the kind words. Your support is really appreciated! Have a happy day. 🌹
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This is amazing Rishika. Wow, so heartening.
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Hi Jude, that is so nice of you! I always love hearing your thoughts on my writings. Thank you for taking the time to read and for the kind words. Hope you have a blessed day. 🌺
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🧡💜 very much my pleasure Rishika.
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Nice poem Rishika!
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Hi Sunith ji, that is so sweet of you! I am happy to hear that and glad that you had a good read. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I hope you have a blessed day. 🌼
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My pleasure
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Great post. I love ❤ the proverb on being alive. ❤
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Hi Suzette, it is so good to hear from you! I am pleased to hear that. I fell in love with that proverb the moment I read it! Thank you for taking the time to read and for your precious words. Hope you have a wonderful day. 🌺
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Rishika, this poem is like a cheerleader for getting something done! ❤ Very motivational!
Have a great day! Cheryl
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Hi Cheryl, I see you changed your name from just “gulf coast poet” to “Cheryl, gulf coast poet” I like it this way! Oh I’m pleased to hear that. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment and I’m grateful for your support. Hope you have a great day. 🌹
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Enjoyed reading this! 💙
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Hey, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I’m so delighted to hear that! Your kind words are truly appreciated. Have a lovely day. 🌼
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Wonderful how you wove in this proverb. This is very much true of this “worldly cage” that exists, and which is actually an artificial cage, but it takes a long time to realize that. Though the quicker you find that out the better. Perhaps 90% of the cage is self-imposed. A very deep and reflective piece as everyone said above. Good work!
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Hi Benjamin! Yes, we put unnecessary pressure on ourselves so often that we don’t realize that life isn’t meant to be difficult always. Sometimes, it’s easy. I am so happy to hear that you enjoyed this one. I fell in love with the proverb just as soon as I read it! Have a brilliant day. 🌺
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We do. So true. And that “unnecessary pressure” is really most of the burden. Have a great weekend!
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I love the proverb and the way you used it to create this beautiful piece of poetry! 😊💖
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Hi Prerna, oh thank you so much for your kind and lovely words! I love the proverb, too. Maybe it could be a life mantra! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
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This is a wonderful post Rishika, and so very true. so many times we can find ourselves living day to day but not really alive. The responsibilities of day to day living can get the best of us and we just race around never stopping to notice anything around us, and forgetting to ask ourselves, “Am I truly feeling alive.”
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Hey Michele, yes I agree with you. Most days, we are unable to be truly alive beneath the burden of these responsibilities. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and for your thoughtful comment. I hope you have a happy day. 🌼
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Such an amazing thought Rishika. Often we tend to get absolved in the worldly processes that we forget ourselves and to live for ourselves. This is an excellent reminder that whatever happens, whatever one may achieve, if you didn’t live your limited time here, you cannot enjoy what may come beyond. 😇
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Hey Harsh, yes, it’s so easy to lose track of what truly matters while we remain forever busy in our schedules and routines. Exactly! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Your words never fail to encourage me. Have a wonderful day. 🌼
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You too Rishika. 😇
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I too have had such problems with the editor and published posts before they are ready! I revert them to drafts, finish editing, and publish when ready.
I love the freedom and hope in this piece! It may be a poem about the burdens we carry, but there is a lot in the knowledge that we live. I too wish to meet death with as much life as possible and pulsing memories of a life well lived. 🙂
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Hey Jaya, this was the first time wp glitched with me, so I was very anxious when it happened.
Oh, that is so good to hear! A life well lived is a life well spent. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I love hearing your thoughts. Have a beautiful day. 🌹
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It’s a wonderful poem! Lots of truth in it!
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Hey Elizabeth, oh thank you so much. I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment and for your kind words. Hope you have a brilliant day. 🌺
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Grazie Goddess!
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Hi Velu, oh well grazie to you for taking the time to read! I’m gathering you enjoyed the poem? Hope you have a wonderful day. 🌼
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Certainly, yes! ❤❤
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This is just beautiful❤❤
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Hi Roshni, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I’m so happy to hear that and glad that you liked it. Hope you have a fantastic day.🌹
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The rose part was absolutely beautiful!
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Hi Hemlatha, that’s so good to hear! I’m happy that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I hope you have a beautiful day. 🌼
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Wow.Loved this poem.
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Hi Simran, I am pleased that you thought so. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Have a great day. 🌺
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Can’t miss awesome.
Keep writing. Keep inspiring.
Thank you so much Rishika.
Have a great evening dear.😊
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