1. She veiled herself, unable to accept the flaws. The world, patiently awaited her exit from hiding, ready for her light.
2. Their reluctant hands met. Sparks flew, warmth coarsed and love grew in the silence. Hiding behind smiles, they embraced it.
This is in response to Twenty Word Tuesday (TWT) held by Bulbul’s Bubble. This week’s prompt was : Hiding (https://wp.me/pbcaAs-xo)
I took two different angles at this. Let me know what you think!
77 replies on “Masked”
Nice expression of the word
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Hey Nawazish, aw that is so nice of you! I am glad that you thought so. Thank you for taking the time to read and drop this kind comment. I hope you have a beautiful day. 🌹
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Fabulous!
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Hi Sean, I am pleased that you thought so! Glad that you had a good read. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. It’s good to hear from you. I hope you have a fantastic day. 🌼
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I like both of them! If I had to pick a favourite I’d pick the first one, because it’s so relatable for many women; they often hide when they really have so much to offer the world. They rarely see themselves as they truly are. Great work Rishika 💜
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Hi, ahh yes! So many of us have so much to offer yet we choose to dwell on the imperfections, often overlooking the goodness and magic. I hope that someday, all of us will emerge out of it. I am pleased that you thought so. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts here. I loved reading this comment of yours. Hope you have a great day. 🌺
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Loved this!
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Hello Arati, it’s so good to hear your thoughts about this! I am pleased that you thought so and had a good read. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave this kind comment. Hope you have a blessed day! 🌹
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I loved both of them! Brilliant words…❤️
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Hi Hemalatha, I am so glad that you thought so! Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment. You are so kind and supportive. I really appreciate it. Hope you have a blessed day. 🌼
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Aww!
I’m flattered!🥰
It’s my pleasure, Rishika!
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Wow this is beautifully written
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Hey Jude, it’s so good to hear from you! Hope you had a great time on your break. I am very delighted that you thought so. Thank you for taking the time to and for your ever appreciative words. Hope you have a perfect day. 🌺
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Hi, thank you Rishika, I did have a good time. It’s always my pleasure to read you🧡
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Beautifully written !
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Hi Era, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. You are always so kind! I really appreciate your supportive and lovely words. I hope you have a blessed day. 🌹
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Pleasure is all mine 😊😊
You too
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Both are awesome, but I love the first story so much. Well done! 👏♥
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Hi Wardah, oh you are so sweet! Your comment brought a smile to my face. I am happy that you had a good read. Thank you for taking the time to read and drop this great comment. I hope you have a happy day 🌼
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You’re welcome, Rishika! Have a happy day as well!! 🌹♥
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Loved how you used the same word in two different interpretations. Both are fab.
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Hi! I’ve found that whenever I put my mind to a single word, so many ideas come to me that I get confused very often. Somehow put these two down. I am so happy that you enjoyed both of these! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I hope you have a beautiful day. 🌺
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The same happens with me, puzzled mind you see 😂. So I can very well relate with you on this.
You too have a great day ahead.
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Beautiful words.. you fabulously written this..
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Hey Krishna, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I am so pleased that you thought of this as a good read. Your encouragement and support is really appreciated. Hope you have a happy day. 🌹
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Thank you dear Rishika
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Nice job once again Rishika with your 20 word prompt. The expresion was beautifully illustrated. ❤️ Cindy
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Hey Cindy, ahh you are always so supportive and encouraging! I am very pleased that you had a good read. I tried two different angles at this. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! Hope you have a blessed day. 🌼
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Beautifully penned 😊
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Hi Ashish, I am very pleased that you thought so and enjoyed these two 20 word pieces. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave this supportive comment! Hope you have a happy day. 🌺
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My pleasure Rishika. You too have a good day. Keep scribbling more ❤️😊
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Beautiful takes!
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Hi Harsh, I am happy that you thought so and had a good read! Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I really appreciate it. Hope you have a great day.🌹
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To love and be loved is something we all may desire. Excellent Rishika. Loved the way you penned these two. 😇
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Hey Harsh, yes exactly! It is rightly said that love is what the world revolves around. It has immense power to heal and beautify. I am so delighted that you thought so. Thank you for taking the time to read and drop this lovely comment. Hope you have a perfect day. 🌼
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You too Rishika. 😇
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Well written lines!!!
Don’t forget to Glee and spread Sparkles ✨
-Nani 💖
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Hi Nani, you are so kind! Thank you for taking the time to read and leave a comment here. I am pleased that you thought so and had a good read. I hope you have a happy day. 🌺
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My pleasure 🥰 Have a great day ahead!!!
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I simply loved this. Loved the way you put it down in words
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Hey, your comment brought a smile to my face! I am so delighted that you had a good read and enjoyed my two takes at the prompt. Also, thank you for taking the time to read and drop this kind comment. Your support is really appreciated! Hope you have a fantastic day. 🌹
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I love the second one more no doubt, it’s more positive, like the start of something… almost a beginning of a fantasy novel hehe 🤩🤩
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Hi Shruba, haha yes, kind of like a dream come true love. Would be beautiful! Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I am so glad that you enjoyed these. Hope you have a great day. 🌼
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It’s a pleasure to read your stuff. I enjoy them everytime. Have a nice day you too! 😁☺
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👌⚘🌷🍀
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🌺❤️
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Loved it, very much, Rishika! Esp the contrasting nature of the two tales is very amazing. You definitely was bang on this week with the prompt! Cheers.
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Hey, oh I am glad that you thought so! I had so many ideas for this prompt, haha. I narrowed it down to these two. I am glad that you enjoyed them. Thank you so much for taking the time to read. Hope you have an excellent day. 🌹
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It is a always a pleasure, dear! Thank you for joining the fun, the more the merrier!
You too have a great day!
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[…] Masked- Whimsical Wordsmith […]
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Hey, I have nominated you for the lockdown tag. I hope you accept my nomination. You can check the post here. https://lifedairyofadreamer.wordpress.com/2020/09/09/the-lockdown-tag/
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Hi Aditi, thank you so much for the nomination! Yes I humbly accept it and will put out a post in a few days. Congratulations for your nomination! 🌹
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Thank you 💙
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So beautifully written, Rishika! 😀💕
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Hey Prerna, I am so pleased that you thought so! Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read. I hope you have a blessed day. 🌼
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Nicely crafted and I highly appreciate your work .
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Hey Avran, I am so pleased that you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for taking the time to read and drop this kind comment! I really appreciate your support. Hope you have a beautiful day. ❤️
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I love how both your perspectives on masks are so very different! Sometimes we hide because we do not know what else to do, but I love how the first piece offers some thoughts from the world waiting the mask to come off. 🙂
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Hi Jaya, sometimes hiding is the only thing we are good at it. The fear of what the world might say keeps us down. But maybe just maybe, the world isn’t all that bad. Or so I like to believe. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I hope you have a blessed day. 🌺
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Nice!!
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Hey Rekha, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I am very delighted that you enjoyed this post. I hope you have a fantastic day. 🌼
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So lovely!
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Hi Luisa, always good to hear your thoughts! I am happy that you liked this post. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. Hope you have a wonderful day. 🌹
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The pleasure is all mine 🌹
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Both were very good, but if I had to pick, I think I liked the first one a bit better. Not because of the quality, as that was fabulous for both, but because of the message of the first.
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Hey Ann, oh you are so sweet! My favourite is the first one too. Maybe the world isn’t as dark and bad as we may believe at times. Maybe it’s just as scared as we are. Or so I believe. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I hope you have a happy day. 🌺
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Beautiful and very well-written!
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Hey Cherie, I am pleased that you enjoyed reading this one. I really appreciate your kind words and encouragement. Thank you for taking the time to read and drop a comment. Hope you have a beautiful day. 🌺
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Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
“WHAT IS WHISPERED IN THE EAR…SHOUT FROM THE HOUSETOPS….MATTHEW 10:27 (pERHAPS-?)
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Hi Jonathan, thank you for taking the time to read and for the reblog. Very appropriate comment! Hope you have a beautiful day. 🌺
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I SURELY WILL NOW! 😀
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Lovely!
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Hey, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I am so delighted that you like it. Grateful for your appreciation. Hope you have a beautiful day. 🌺
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Hope u have an awesome day to🌻
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sweet…..
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Hi, thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I am so pleased that you had a good read and enjoyed it. Hope you have a wonderful day. 🌼
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